Sunday, January 3, 2010

A WALK TO REMEMBER

What about moonlight walk
What about those long phone talk
What about that foggy night on 1st January
What about that 7 September anniversary

What about your promises made before god together
What about love which we feel and made for each other
What about all the dreams which were yours and mine
I donno how you will justify all these before divine

I used to dream like venus and mars
I used to glance beyond the stars
Now I don't know where we are
Although I know we've drifted far

you took reason of wine
The road ahead is pine
those feelings and emotions were just crime
my crying and sweating will not go in vine



I know only this I am not in my mind
I only know I had been very kind
What will the future is only in time
I donno why I am playing this rhyme

Time is not gonna be fine
These are not just wordings of mine
Picture has not completed yet
That I will complete ,so just wait

5 comments:

  1. Really a masterpeice...Keep rocking like this man.

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  2. the thing with poetry is that, i can't remember what i read in last 2 lines. I just can't connect the whole poem. But, whatever I could get, a good start. As they say, practice makes a man perfect. I am sure, you will not left any stone unturned to master this art either just like you have been doing so far with other things. Conviction is what differentiate you from others.

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  3. darkness engulfed for some time, but iam happy you'll wait for the sunshine...

    good ending and completely different from the movie 'A WALK TO REMEMBER' ;)

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  4. good job...."definitly a quote to remember"

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